Quarantined like a disease
My cell full of flies
I walk with a seeing eye dog
Stitches sewn in my eyes

I feel the back hand of fate
I swear it is rape
The way it tortures me
My life he sedates

I lash out in ways that are inhuman
I go back to my primal instinct
Because of the way he stains my leather
In matters that are most distinct

For you can read the story imprinted on my skin
Of a monster who rapes my rights
For no moment do I get of solitude
Neither sunshine nor moonlight

He blackens my lungs more than any smoke may
He infects me just like a cancer
For he is the god in my realm
It is to him that I must answer

My colors have been smudged and ruined
My pages torn beyond repair
For I have washed into the gutter
Nobody to answer my prayers

My brain has been beat and battered without one word spoken
My bones purge out my skin, blood ridden, smashed and broken

When I call for help I only reach the wolf instead
So then no body believes me,
Not even one tear shed.

My outsides are blackened and splattered with carmine
On the inside I am falling apart,Dying,
Never to speak again
Oh and i am only 14 haha

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5 Responses to “Is this a good poem about being contained and abused?”
  1. Brayla Rachelle says:

    it sounds like you’ve been through a lot.. i also write the occassional poem and story.. i’m going to be really honest with you.. the poem as a work of anything more than primal venting, needs a lot of revision. it doesn’t make sense. we don’t know if he’s cancer or disease.. a tattoo…God or an animal perhaps? or if you are still blind..? i mean this in the nicest way of course.

  2. butterfligirly1300 says:

    Wow that is good!!!

  3. Legandivori says:

    YOU have promise Study poetic forms too and use of poetic language.

  4. Steven S says:

    This is the best poem I have ever heard

  5. maddamselfly in Abalama says:

    It’s a start.
    go back and edit it..
    read it and listen then fix the bits that don’t sound right..

    good luck

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